Why year fours should go to camp

I am writing to you to express my opinion about why Year 4s should be able to go to school camp. As camp holds many exciting activities that would benefit the Year 4s.

Kayaking

For example kayaking is a good activity to develop life skills for when you grow up because at one point  you will have to understand it’s your duty to look after yourself.  Also that you have to learn to be safe in the water because if you go to the beach and you don’t know how to swim you might drown.

Archery  

Archery is also very helpful because it helps you get better  at sport such as baseball because you have to throw it at a target. It is  good because it helps you never give up until you have succeeded.

I strongly believe that year fours should go to camp. Please consider these ideas carefully and I really look forward to hearing back from you.

Your sincerely

Shlok

states of matter

Dear photographer

I am writing to you to express my opinion about the way you take and arrange the class photographs.

I think you should put the teachers in the front and students at the back because teachers are tall and students so we can see everyone better.

Obviously you have to agree people will buy more photographs if you represent our school a bit more by putting the Halsey Drive School emblem instead of the red background so they know what school we are.

You will understand  that you should put the year photos of each year on the outside and then in the middle put a photo of the whole of every grade so it can tell everyone what each  year has been doing this year.

I’m certain that you will agree that we should photograph people who are absent and photoshop them into the photo so they know everyone and If they don’t see the full class it won’t be a class photo.

Surely everyone knows if you don’t jumble up the photos everybody could find the photo easier and see the photos of their teachers and friends and remember how much fun they had that year.

It is clear that if you put the photos each event that year it will really show see the energy of people having fun.

I’m absolutely certain that you should read my ideas most carefully. You may or may not agree with my opinions but please do consider them . I look forward to hearing back from you.

Yours sincerely shlok malhotra

shlok eel

I was lowering the jumbo eel as it was chomping its teeth like a shark. My hands started to tremble with fear but it was going to feed our tribe several weeks. The hunger. I started to lick my lips like mad. It came from the river and I could see the flesh. I used the pigeon as bait to make it come closer. Soon my friend Jack had caught it and we cheered. I was desperate to chomp my teeth into this beauty of an eel.

Soon at dinner time we cooked the eel I was so greedy that almost the whole eel was done. I felt petrified as ever my gorgeous had been gobbled up. So the next day we went back to the river but there was nothing. I was shocked so I went to my tribe with a miserable face. So that day we didn't eat anything. We starved the whole night gazing up at the stars hoping food would return.

When the sun rose up and everyone was still asleep me and Jack went back to the river we could see a whole bunch of scrumptious clean food and perfect food. We grabbed the food and ran back and that night we had a feast . Then several years after there was only one pice of eel left so I said mine. So I told him I will take it but in reply Jack said the same thing. We decided  to fight however loses will not eat the crispy eel. I brang half the tribe and Jack brang the other half. Our swords rose and we charged at each other after many days me and Jack were the only ones left but we decided to share it .

A letter from gallipoli

27th April 1918

Dear dad

Here in Gallipoli the noise is tremendous like the sound of a bullet. Rifles are being shot and people are being killed. It's really hard being a soldier I mean like it is so hot out here and the pollution is so bad even there's flies out here!. We have to carry water up the hill and it’s really retiring and everybody is worn out. We have underground dugouts. The sounds of big snipers exploding are big  but I’m finally getting use to it. The violence is terrifying and everybody's health is really bad. We are wondering were our enemy is now. There are many dreadful things over here like the heat. Suddenly I find this map which will help us make our fight more interesting and help us come back into the war. So I pick it up and follow the mysterious map throw the horrifying smell of poo. I have to dodge arrows not touch the mud using the trees to help me. The sound is quiet and I feel nervous. Then suddenly I  find this gun so I pick it up and keep walking. Then comes the interesting part it says that there enemies are fighting up against our country you must hurry. I start to run and suddenly in the far distance I can see them fighting so I start sniping them and then everyone is dead we claim victory I shout.

Love from your son shlok

shlok opinion

Dear photographer

I am writing to you to express my opinion about the way you take and arrange the class photographs.

I think you should put the teachers in the front and students at the back because teachers are tall and students so we can see everyone better.

Obviously you have to agree people will buy more photographs if you represent our school a bit more by putting the Halsey Drive School emblem instead of the red background so they know what school we are.

You will understand  that you should put the year photos of each year on the outside and then in the middle put a photo of the whole of every grade so it can tell everyone what each  year has been doing this year.

I’m certain that you will agree that we should photograph people who are absent and photoshop them into the photo so they know everyone and If they don’t see the full class it won’t be a class photo.

Surely everyone knows if you don’t jumble up the photos everybody could find the photo easier and see the photos of their teachers and friends and remember how much fun they had that year.

It is clear that if you put the photos each event that year it will really show see the energy of people having fun.