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Last week we wrote a persuasive writing about why you should join a multicultural group.
Last week we wrote a persuasive writing about why you should join a multicultural group.
Do you think it's important to join a multicultural group? Well it sure is because you have to show respect!!! And if you don’t they won’t respect you either. Today I am going to persuade you why we should join a multicultural group. I will talk about how it can help build motor skills, teamwork skills and showing respect for that culture. Children must do this because its vital for them to learn about other cultures so that they can make trust and because it's good for health.
As a children must my first point is that it helps build motor skills!!!!!! The reason i am saying this is because if you do this it will be good for your health and fitness and as you should know fitness is super helpful because it keeps you active. Fitness is also key because fitness helps you stay away from sickness and it makes sure you don’t have weight gain,it will have effect on your heart if you eat sugar and much more.According to google if you eat too much sugar it increases the percent that you could die and the best way to stop that is by eating healthy.Eating healthy also prevents you from having a sore tummy or a tummy ache. That is why it is so important to join a multicultural group.in addition to that there is another point that point is that it is good for coordination of limbs because it has a lower chance of getting injured and you will use less energy.AS some of you might or not know there is a thing called fine motor skills and gross motor skills.For instance google has said fine motor skills are achieved when we children use our small muscles such as our hand,fingers and wrists.Now gross motor skills are much larger movements and energetic movements such as walking,kicking,jumping and climbing.
Okay guys that's one reason done so here is my second if you join a multicultural you will build teamwork skills.For example you will build trust and respect from other people and respect is one of the main things in the world because if you don’t show respect you will be lonely, people will make fun of you and they won’t respect you.So if i were you you must join a multicultural group it’s for your own sake so believe it or not these things will happen maybe not quickly but mark my words it’s bad so join a multicultural group!!!Next one guys if you have teamwork skills and make friends they will back you up and support you the whole way and If you have no confidence and don’t have the will to succeed you will never have true friends so be bold and never give up because you never know if you never try.As some of you should know Michael Jordan had lots of confidence and the will to achieve anything despite failing many times he kept persevering and that is why he succeeded.
My third and last point is that if you have to show respect for the culture because if you value and care for that culture they will care for you. The good things in life if you join a multicultural group you will have friends, people will like you and so you learn about cultures you might not know about and that will make you smarter. So you see you will learn more, you will have better oral language so if someone ask you a question you will know how to answer it and if you show that you care for that culture and suddenly in the multicultural group you guys might be learning about your language so then people will show respect for your language and you will feel happy trust me.
Overall i think it's super important cause it’s good for health and you will be smarter so you will have friends and people will care about your language. Also you will build trust and respect from people and it shows it’s alright to be different from people. So it’s vital you join a multicultural group!!!!!!!!!!!!! So please join a multicultural group it’s for your own good so that covers all my main three points and I hope you see that it’s extremely effective if you join a multicultural group.
