The coral reef is full of vibrant staghorn coral.  It looks like the bumpy bits of an apple pie pastry.  The vibrant, vivid coral sways side to side like the palm trees in Hawaii.

This mako shark is  14 foot and weighs 280 kgs.  It is a monster who swims by school’s of fish, scaring them with his existence.  The mako shark is a beast at swimming and if you look at it swim you will be flabbergasted. The mako shark is as long as the sky tower.

The mako shark is as long as a giraffe laying sideways and swims as fast as a tracer bullet. The shark rapidly darts through the water like Usain Bolt.  The mako shark’s fins are as sharp as a knights sword. The mako shark is as thin as a skeleton and is as long as a pole. The sun beams down on to the glistening water like a rocket about to land. The mako shark swims in the water like a speed boat going at 500 km per hour. The mako shark’s fins are as sharp as  a roof’s edge. The water is as cold as Antarctica but with no ice.

The bold coral reef stands out like a professional painting.

My book review

shloks colour poem

Shlok’s colour poem 
Green
Fresh grass swaying side to side.
Lush green trees quietly sleeping.
My vibrant school uniform.
Yummy broccoli crunching in my mouth.
A delectable green apple crunching the juice out of it.
The school turf that halsey drive school runs around like crazy.
Green is rustling leaves making a big racket.
Green is like beans being digested.
Green is like hot green tea burning in my mouth.
Green smells like dirty green socks after being in the mud.
Green smells like rotten,liquidy green paint.
Green smalls like mother nature.
Green taste like a prickly cucumber munching im my mouth.
Green taste like frosty mint ice cream melting in my mouth on a hot summer day.
Green taste like peppermint lollies being smashed in my mouth as if dynamite had suddenly hit the earth.

why ronaldo is the best

Speech Judging Sheet

Name:  Shlok     Topic: Ronaldo is the best football player in the world                 

Category	Main Points	Self Assessment
		Low                                         High
		1           2 3           4 5
Structure	My speech was organised logically into paragraphs, with an effective introduction and a conclusion.	4
Delivery	I used some gestures, stood still and made eye contact with my audience. My voice was clear and loud.  I didn’t speak too quickly or too slowly.	3.5
Content	My speech had a message and was original, interesting and relevant to the audience.	3.5
Language	I used ‘powerful’ words in my speech.  I also included some language features (eg repetition, alliteration, similes etc)	4
Time	My speech was between 2 ½ and 3 ½ minutes long.	5

Next time I need to

Next time I need to use less hand gestures and not repeat the same one.

Teacher Comment

Well done Shlok, your speech was well written. You used a good story/scenario in your introduction to get the audience interested in your topic and had some good questioning throughout your speech.  Your next step is to slow down slightly so that your speech is clearer and easier to understand.

why ronaldo is the best

“Look dad!” Charlie said “Ronaldo is coming onto the pitch and everyone is clapping.”  “Oh Charlie! He’s the best player in the world, that’s why they are clapping.”

“I thought Messi was the best player in the world,”  Charlie said.

“Well wait and see.”

In case you haven’t guessed, Charlie and his dad are at the Uefa league championship and Real Madrid are playing Barcelona in the final. In case you don’t know, Ronaldo is much better than Messi because of his…….. you know what….you’ll just have to keep on listening to find out why.

Ok. Here is why Ronaldo is the best, his shooting and accuracy against all clubs and formats of the game and his outrageous left foot make him unstoppable.  Ronaldo is the best player in the world because of his leadership which has led Real Madrid to win the Uefa cup 3 times in a row. Ronaldo has scored 34 la liga hat tricks in his career so far. Ronaldo is also  known for his pace and is called the backheel king in football. He is as fast as lightning and has crazy dribbling against all clubs. He is the best because he was picked by Juventus for over 100 million for everything such as  headers and his remarkable free kicks that's why he obviously got bought by Juventus. Ronaldo is remarkable because he can change the game around because he has done that more times than anybody else and if he hasn't he has substituted in important times.

Ronaldo is the best because he scored 539 goals in his career so far and that is 32 more goals than Lionel Messi.Ronaldo is well the best because he is the top Real Madrid goal scorer using his right foot,left foot and his head to score goals against every goalkeeper in the world including Manuel Neuer who apparently is the world best goalie.Ronaldo is the top Europe goal scorer and is a goal machine against everybody. Ronaldo is the best because he is one of the top 10 goal scorers.

Another reason why Ronaldo is the best is because he has got the most golden boots at the moment and he has got four golden boots. Here is another reason why ronaldo is the best because he has magically got 5 ballon d'ors which is insane and nobody except Lionel Messi who has also 5 ballon d'ors but Ronaldo has more golden boots which da da ta makes him the best player in the world. Ronaldo is the best player in the world not Lionel Messi.

Overall Ronaldo has to be the best, am I right?  Well I am sure you have to agree with me now that you’ve heard my speech.  In my opinion, as you can see…. Ronaldo is the best! When I was growing up I wanted to see him and when I saw him I was amazed and that's why I decided to play soccer and to right a speech about him.  So, If you like Ronaldo give me a big cheer.

Reference

Top 10  reasons why ronaldo is the best

shlok year money changes sequence

My money note

I have decided to put Beauden Barrett on my note because he is a famous rugby player and is one of the fastest players in the world. My note is a 100,000 dollar note. My note has security features such as a tukutuku panel to tell them that this is the real note. I have also put a holographic  window to make sure know one steals it. My holographic window is a camera to spot people if the robber has cracked the code of the bank it will alert them.