Where am I?
Ring! Ring! There are always lots of customers arriving on Saturday after having a swim at the beach. “Yum, that was delectable” said one,
“One chocolate muffin” said another.
“Brrrrrrrr this is cold, I want a brownie,”
“Okay one brownie coming up.”
“Thank you.”
This place is very chaotic and most fanatics are eager to enjoy what’s on offer. There are lots of edible cones made from a type of cooked batter. You can hear people gossiping and chattering as they wait for their appetising frozen treat. People would usually come after a dive in the water or after having a leisurely stroll. SLURP! People lick the cold, creamy, soft filling and smile in delight.
Where am I describing?
nice language
ReplyDeletei like your where am i description but next time don't make it that obvious.
ReplyDeleteNeelansh
i like how you used some speech i think your describing MOVEN PICK
ReplyDeleteis yous an ice cream shop? and i like how you used a lot of speech next make it make more sence
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